Songwriters Corner (Original Songs)

[foxygraandpa]

Thanks you guys!

[CrazyCrazy]

Another demo

I Go Down To The Graveyard (Version 1)

I Go Down To The Graveyard (Version 2)

I Go Down To The Graveyard (Version 3)

[Graham76man]

Another demo

"I can't believe your gone"

I can as I was after 30 seconds of version one and two!

Sorry don't give up the day job

[CrazyCrazy]

Another demo

"I can't believe your gone"

I can as I was after 30 seconds of version one and two!

Sorry don't give up the day job

Shame! It was only for fun anyway!

[Sideout]

Bite My Tongue

I don't want to hurt your feelings
But I'm not going to bite my tongue
People always tell me to bite it hard
I'm not going to keep my mouth shut
I'm going to speak my mind no matter what
You'll always get the truth from me whether you like it or not

I don't like the recent choices you've made
You're being really foolish and you only have yourself to blame
What the hell are you thinking
You must be out of your frickin' mind

Everyone always tells you what you want to hear
But I'm going to be brutally honest with you if I have to
I think you're making a huge mistake
Someone needs to set you straight and I guess that has to be me

I don't want to hurt your feelings
But I'm not going to bite my tongue
People always tell me to bite it hard
I'm not going to keep my mouth shut
I'm going to speak my mind no matter what
You'll always get the truth from me whether you like it or not

I'm gonna tell you like it really is
If you get mad by what I say, oh well
I don't know why you don't listen to me
But one day you will see that i was right all along
Don't you know I'm only looking out for you

Why do you have to be so difficult
You never listen to anyone
You always think you're right, you're never wrong
You're such a god dam hypocrite

I don't want to hurt your feelings
But I'm not going to bite my tongue
People always tell me to bite it hard
I'm not going to keep my mouth shut
I'm going to speak my mind no matter what
You'll always get the truth from me whether you like it or not

[foxygraandpa]

"Memory Lane (I Am The One)"

(Titled this Memory Lane because the song is too dirty for a high school aged singer to song (Justin Beiber) and a little too creepy for an older singer without knowing the background context. This song is just all about the state of mind of a popular guy in high school, or some peoples worst nightmare.)

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

Equal amounts of kids
Love me and hate me
But they're just jealous
Cuz their girls wanna date me
I've got plastic guys
They fight for my opinion
You could call them friends
But I see them as minions
Half the student body, talks about me once a day
I've heard pregnancy rumors, even some that I'm gay
But I really don't care, cuz I'm so exclusive
Many have tried to be me
But they just can't do it

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I'm just an average guy
With above average sensibility
Heavily envied and people probably wanna kill me
But I'm pretty sick
And I love the attention it brings me
I'll start a fight
Just because it's entertaining
If you don't like me, then your only choice is to fear me
I could whisper
But everyone shuts up to hear me
I'm a shoe-in for homecoming
And I'm not even running
Did I mention I'm sick
More than 60 girls have tried my d---

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I throw the hottest parties
I have the hottest body
I drive the newest car
My outlook is pretty far

I'm just a cocky jerk
But for me it just works
If you wanna be like me fall in line
Otherwise I have no time

[RAP]
Uhh.. Uhhh What? Okay
Listen up Listen up
Yeah I'm high in school
I could vomit on myself and still be cool
Because everything I do everybody wants to copy
parents pissed about it cuz their children are not me
The most talked about for years to come
It comes naturally because I am the one
Student body prez
Student teachers give me h---
Junior girl texting, wanna get in my bed?
It's crazy but if I've done this all so young
Time will only tell what's to come
I am the one

[foxygraandpa]

"Memory Lane (I Am The One)"

(Titled this Memory Lane because the song is too dirty for a high school aged singer to song (Justin Beiber) and a little too creepy for an older singer without knowing the background context. This song is just all about the state of mind of a popular guy in high school, or some peoples worst nightmare.)

I was thinking the song would have a rocky done, kind of something ala Kevin Rudoulph?

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

Equal amounts of kids
Love me and hate me
But they're just jealous
Cuz their girls wanna date me
I've got plastic guys
They fight for my opinion
You could call them friends
But I see them as minions
Half the student body, talks about me once a day
I've heard pregnancy rumors, even some that I'm gay
But I really don't care, cuz I'm so exclusive
Many have tried to be me
But they just can't do it

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I'm just an average guy
With above average sensibility
Heavily envied and people probably wanna kill me
But I'm pretty sick
And I love the attention it brings me
I'll start a fight
Just because it's entertaining
If you don't like me, then your only choice is to fear me
I could whisper
But everyone shuts up to hear me
I'm a shoe-in for homecoming
And I'm not even running
Did I mention I'm sick
More than 60 girls have tried my d---

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I throw the hottest parties
I have the hottest body
I drive the newest car
My outlook is pretty far

I'm just a cocky jerk
But for me it just works
If you wanna be like me fall in line
Otherwise I have no time

[RAP]
Uhh.. Uhhh What? Okay
Listen up Listen up
Yeah I'm high in school
I could vomit on myself and still be cool
Because everything I do everybody wants to copy
parents pissed about it cuz their children are not me
The most talked about for years to come
It comes naturally because I am the one
Student body prez
Student teachers give me h---
Junior girl texting, wanna get in my bed?
It's crazy but if I've done this all so young
Time will only tell what's to come
I am the one

[oasisbobo]

Star In The Sky

The first time I saw your eyes I knew you we're a star
You are something special that's just the way you are
You would always laugh while playing with your hair
I seem to think about you every time I close my eyes you're there

The one and only star in the sky made me think of you

Like the gentle breeze on a warm summers day
My melting heart you could mold like clay
If I ever miss you I'll just close my eyes and dream
Cause when I dream missing you is what it seems

The one and only star in the sky made me think of you

Walking close to you feeling nervous and shy
I give a little smile as I look up at the sky
Talking to you untill it's time to go home
I get on the bus just to realise I'm alone

The one and only star in the sky made me think of you

[oasisbobo]

My first album is sorted Well lyricaly anyway

George Smith - Possibly

1. Dreamland
2. Almost Like One
3. How Can It Be?
4. Change
5. Nowhere
6. The Moon and Stars
7. Dance In The Snow
8. My Dreams
9. Jades Song
10. Your Smile
11. Star In The Sky
12. Live Your Life

[swiftie13]

^ I have an album too (lyrically speaking)!Here's my "album" so far.


HRJR ("self titled" debut)

1. Perfect
2. Do We Care
3. Meat and Bones
4. Dancing In The Rain
5. Dear God
6. Come Closer[
7. Forever
8. Should've Known
9. Me Vs. The World

[oasisbobo]

I have about 30 complete songs, but since ive only been writing for about almost 2 years, all of the early attempts are rubbish But I would never throw them away

"Album" number two under way haha

[oasisbobo]

"Album" number two is half written Can't wait to show people the lyrics

[oasisbobo]

The lyrics for my second "album" is written It's gonna be called 'Smith Style' Here is the tracklisting

George Smith - Smith Style

1. Stop For No One
2. Sunday Morning Feeling
3. You're In My Dreams Of Love
4. Everything Will Be Fine
5. You
6. Looking At A Star
7. Who Knows?
8. Once In A While
9. In My Mind
10. How I Feel
11. The End

Lyrics will be revealed soon

[oasisbobo]

Stop For No One

Take the time to live your life
And do the things you want to do
Dont look back with regrets
Or think of things you'd rather just forget

See the world the way you want to
Do what you want let nothing stop you
Lets be young and lets be free
Live our lifes and be who we want to be

We are young this is our time
We'll get drunk and have some fun
We'll keep going and stop for no one

Waking up in the middle of the afternoon
Rubbing your eyes feeling rough
The previous nights drinking session
You didnt think would be so tough

The next night your feeling better
You get dressed up feeling good
You're feeling happy so you phone a friend
It's time to have fun and do it all again

We are young this is our time
We'll get drunk and have some fun
We'll keep going and stop for no one

Track one on my second "album" called Stop For No One and is about being young, getting drunk and doing what you want

[JimJim]

I do honestly believe that a lot of UKMixers could probably write a hit pop song, as we all know most of the formula that works.

All you guys posting original lyrics... aren't you a little worried that Beyonce might be lurking on the forums?!

(I kid, I kid)

[oasisbobo]

My lyrics are starting to get alot better Hopefully people can see some development and improvement Feedback would be very greatful, oh and If anyone has any questions please ask Feedback could be as simple as saying which lines stick out for you Thanks

[swiftie13]

Stop For No One

Take the time to live your life
And do the things you want to do
Dont look back with regrets
Or think of things you'd rather just forget

See the world the way you want to
Do what you want let nothing stop you
Lets be young and lets be free
Live our lifes and be who we want to be

We are young this is our time
We'll get drunk and have some fun
We'll keep going and stop for no one

Waking up in the middle of the afternoon
Rubbing your eyes feeling rough
The previous nights drinking session
You didnt think would be so tough

The next night your feeling better
You get dressed up feeling good
You're feeling happy so you phone a friend
It's time to have fun and do it all again

We are young this is our time
We'll get drunk and have some fun
We'll keep going and stop for no one

Track one on my second "album" called Stop For No One and is about being young, getting drunk and doing what you want

I personally don't like writing about getting drunk but I love the lyrics of this song. The first few lines are epic. Keep it up!

[swiftie13]

I started writing this song a couple of days ago and haven't finished it. I will eventually, I just wanted to show you guys the beginning and see what ya'll think

I named it Me Vs. The World

I'm taking a long walk to the middle of nowhere in my head
In a never ending back road up and endless mountain
Higher than the Everest, I know I'm not the best, I just need a lot of rest
I think I've just got a bit too much to handle, my hands are crippling
My back is giving in under the wight
My life is quickly fading, just a moment ago I remember waking and taking in oxygen
Now I'm laying back in my bed
Trying to differentiate fact from fiction under the dim moonlight outside my window
I see my reflection,
Am I who I wanna be? Will I later be content of the person I invent?
I just wanna shut my eyes, take a deep breath and run away from this chaos, from this nonsense
I feel numb, expressionless
Am I fearful or fearless? Careful or careless?
Too much too long livin' like this

Chorus
I'm taking a one way ticket to nowhere
Feeling like this since forever
Don't know what'll become of me or my destiny
I just keep on asking when will my life begin
I'm facing life blindfolded
Every step is left unknown
It's just the never ending, epic battle of
Me Vs. the World



That's all I got so far, I really like it. My sister was reading it and said she loved the last few lines a lot. I also was planning to name this :

"Epic"
"Epic Battle"
"Me against the World" (And change the last lyric a bit)
"Me versus The World"
"When Will My Life Begin?"

I love the word "Epic" so I'm a little indecisive

Let me know what ya'll think of this so far

[oasisbobo]

Me Vs. The World is EPIC! Wow, I love it Very very powerful man

[swiftie13]

Me Vs. The World is EPIC! Wow, I love it Very very powerful man

Ha ha thanks! I'll try to finish it soon

[oasisbobo]

Don't rush it or try and force it It'll finish when it is meant to finish

[swiftie13]

"Memory Lane (I Am The One)"

(Titled this Memory Lane because the song is too dirty for a high school aged singer to song (Justin Beiber) and a little too creepy for an older singer without knowing the background context. This song is just all about the state of mind of a popular guy in high school, or some peoples worst nightmare.)

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

Equal amounts of kids
Love me and hate me
But they're just jealous
Cuz their girls wanna date me
I've got plastic guys
They fight for my opinion
You could call them friends
But I see them as minions
Half the student body, talks about me once a day
I've heard pregnancy rumors, even some that I'm gay
But I really don't care, cuz I'm so exclusive
Many have tried to be me
But they just can't do it

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I'm just an average guy
With above average sensibility
Heavily envied and people probably wanna kill me
But I'm pretty sick
And I love the attention it brings me
I'll start a fight
Just because it's entertaining
If you don't like me, then your only choice is to fear me
I could whisper
But everyone shuts up to hear me
I'm a shoe-in for homecoming
And I'm not even running
Did I mention I'm sick
More than 60 girls have tried my d---

I am the one
(The guy that everybody talks about)
I am the one
(The freshman taking senior girls out)
I am the one
(That gives opinion and decides what's cool)
I am the one
(The most pop-ular guy in high school)

I throw the hottest parties
I have the hottest body
I drive the newest car
My outlook is pretty far

I'm just a cocky jerk
But for me it just works
If you wanna be like me fall in line
Otherwise I have no time

[RAP]
Uhh.. Uhhh What? Okay
Listen up Listen up
Yeah I'm high in school
I could vomit on myself and still be cool
Because everything I do everybody wants to copy
parents pissed about it cuz their children are not me
The most talked about for years to come
It comes naturally because I am the one
Student body prez
Student teachers give me h---
Junior girl texting, wanna get in my bed?
It's crazy but if I've done this all so young
Time will only tell what's to come
I am the one

Love this song. Your lyrics are amazing! So much talent in this thread. I can just imagine a melody in my head and someone doing a pimp walk while singing it!

[oasisbobo]

Sunday Morning Feeling

Wake up early on a sunday morning
Look outside the birds are callin'
The stars they fade away
As the night turns into day

The sun is rising like a star it shines
My previous nights worries seem to be fine
Waking up with a smile on my face
With a smile I seem to enjoy this place

Going out with not a care in the world
Coming back in the middle of the night
Im happy again this is the way it should be
Looking up at the sky, arms open, feeling free

Why can't I always feel like this
With no plans and nowhere to be
If only you could see what I see
The past has gone so don't look back

Like falling in love for the first time
This feeling is the best
One day this world will be mine
The furture is coming lets make it better than the rest

[swiftie13]

Me Vs. The World (Epic)

I'm taking a long walk to the middle of nowhere in my head
In a never ending back road up and endless mountain
Higher than the Everest, I know I'm not the best, I just need a lot of rest
I think I've just got a bit too much to handle, my hands are crippling
My back is giving in under the weight
My life is quickly fading, just a moment ago I remember waking and taking in oxygen
Now I'm laying back in my bed
Trying to differentiate fact from fiction under the dim moonlight outside my window
I see my reflection,
Am I who I wanna be? Will I later be content of the person I invent?
I just wanna shut my eyes, take a deep breath and run away from this chaos, from this nonsense
I feel numb, expressionless
Am I fearful or fearless? Careful or careless?
Too much too long livin' like this

Chorus
I'm taking a one way ticket to nowhere
Feeling like this since forever
Don't know what'll become of me or my destiny
I just keep on asking when will my life begin
I'm facing life blindfolded
Every step is left unknown
It's just the never ending, epic battle of
Me Vs. the World

I feel like letting go of all my pains, of my mistakes
But I can't cause the make me who I am
I feel like my strength is pouring out of me like blood from an open wound
Wish I could freeze time and move everything where I wanted it
I wish that my life was perfect, but who's is?
Want the whole world to myself and have it in my hands
Everything would function according to my plans
Don't want to live in monotony
Tedious repetition, can't you see?
The days are too long and just so dull
Nothing seems to fit in it's place
Guess trouble's just something I'll have to face
What does fate have in store for me?
I feel numb, expressionless
Am I fearful or fearless? Careful or careless?
Too much too long livin' like this

Chorus
I'm taking a one way ticket to nowhere
Feeling like this since forever
Don't know what'll become of me or my destiny
I just keep on asking when will my life begin
I'm facing life blindfolded
Every step is left unknown
It's just the never ending, epic battle of
Me Vs. the World

I keep praying to the Omniscient One
The One that does things for a reason
The One that'll fix all the damage done in the end
But His time and my time just aren't in sync
It's just a matter of time, I'll just have to wait

It's just an epic battle...
I feel numb, expressionless
Am I fearful or fearless? Careful or careless?
Too much too long livin' like this

Chorus

I'm taking a one way ticket to nowhere
Feeling like this since forever
Don't know what'll become of me or my destiny
I just keep on asking when will my life begin
I'm facing life blindfolded
Every step is left unknown
It's just the never ending, epic battle of
Me Vs. the World

I feel alone, disoriented
So messed up and complicated
Misunderstood, someone save me
i feel like the world will win this battle
I'm facing life blindfolded
Every step is left unknown
It's just the never ending, epic battle of
Me Vs. the World


I just finished it today! I hope it's good enough .I hope ya'll like it. It's a song that just expresses my feelings whenever I feel down and I've been feeling a lot like that lately (just teenager stuff I guess) I know it will get better though. Let me know what you think Btw I renamed it a little

Ya'll could give me recommendations for titles too if you want (a song's title is VERY important to me, and I also love parenthesis )

[swiftie13]

Sunday Morning Feeling

Wake up early on a sunday morning
Look outside the birds are callin'
The stars they fade away
As the night turns into day

The sun is rising like a star it shines
My previous nights worries seem to be fine
Waking up with a smile on my face
With a smile I seem to enjoy this place

Going out with not a care in the world
Coming back in the middle of the night
Im happy again this is the way it should be
Looking up at the sky, arms open, feeling free

Why can't I always feel like this
With no plans and nowhere to be
If only you could see what I see
The past has gone so don't look back

Like falling in love for the first time
This feeling is the best
One day this world will be mine
The furture is coming lets make it better than the rest

In my opinion it's one of your best, it's just so fluent and has rythym. I love the lyrics. I have in bold my favorite lines. I just love Sundays!