Songwriters Corner (Original Songs)

by **Formusic** » Sat May 19, 2012 5:09 pm

Timmy94 wrote:@Formusic: Merci beaucoup... Excuse-moi pour les fauts mais le francais est plus difficile que l'Anglais, c'est parce que Tu Me Connais n'est pas tres profond...
J'espere que mon francais devient plus bon alors que je peux ecrire plus de chansons francais et lequels qui sont plus exigeant .

non tu le parles déjà très bien :wink:

par exemple il y a pas de fautes dans ton post, c'était juste une petite remarque ^^

Les paroles de Tu Me Connais me font penser à Coeur De Pirate ou à Carla Bruni (je sais pas si tu connais) , leur textes sont généralement comme ça, simples mais excellents

ok let s go back to the English mode before we get banned :lol:

by **Timmy94** » Sat May 26, 2012 12:29 am

Run Away

Timmalicious / 5:08

Money doesn't change people but people change money
As bitter as plain chocolate as sweet as honey
What would it do if a short guy like me he does
Take a run away and waits for the delaying bus

And as easy it sounds as difficult it becomes
In moments when you wish to make it all undone
And as closed the door it seems without a key
Just run away and you couldn't be more free

In a moment everything can turn to past
In a time when nothing really lasts
In the glory light you seem to stand
Imagine us walking hand in hand
Could there ever be a way out of it
Like we always used to dream of it
Could our prayers be heard by a soul
Just like a treasure full of gold

There's not an easy way but many of choices
No way to ignore them in a choir of wise voices
The youth is no excuse for not asking questions
Coz when you are old it's a dead suggestion

As cold a touch seems as warm it catches the heart
In the moment the common will it connects two parts
When you are not human enough to be a machine
Just run away and have a check of your engine

In a moment everything can turn to past
In a time when nothing really lasts
In the glory light you seem to stand
Imagine us walking hand in hand
Could there ever be a way out of it
Like we always used to dream of it
Could our prayers be heard by a soul
Just like a treasure full of gold

When a miracle is helpful but doesn't lead to happiness
Because it only leads in questions with no answers
Now how to deal with them, just say, without to run away

In a moment everything can turn to past
In a time when nothing really lasts
In the glory light you seem to stand
Imagine us walking hand in hand
Could there ever be a way out of it
Like we always used to dream of it
Could our prayers be heard by a soul
Just like a treasure full of gold

Money doesn't change people but people change money

by **Timmy94** » Sat May 26, 2012 12:49 am

(The Lie Is My) Special Field

Timmalicious / 4:30

I'm so ignorant, I'm such an egoist
and the lie is my special field
How I come to go this way?
You better let my creator say

When I look at all the poosed
Seeing all things I shouldn't do
Why I did it in the end?
You better ask my friend

It's not a secret I'm an epic fool
How ridiculous I tried to be cool
Guess I can't even write my name
Thank my brother for this shame

Write all sins on a paper
Clever words you see later
Nothing white left to view
What a liar's got to do

by **Timmy94** » Sun May 27, 2012 3:00 pm

...on the bench

Timmalicious / 6:53

You think that life is slow
While it's the fastest that can happen
Once you have been a child
Look where you are now

It's like a river flowing
We stand at the shore
Will it be able to reach
The same point ever again

And so it goes on
While I'm sitting on the bench
I've been sitting on the bench
See me sitting on the bench

I'm sitting on the bench
Wasting all my life
By asking shoulda, coulda, wouldas
Like I had a clue, guess I need some help from you

While you take your steps
Printed in the golden sand
Will we ever see them again?
And will one of us remember

Like a little sweet song
Trailing away in the night
Only the homeless remembers
Before the cold takes his life

I wished I could help him
But I'm sitting on the bench
While I forgot how to clench
Though the rain got me drenched

I'm sitting on the bench
Wasting all my life
By asking shoulda, coulda, wouldas
Like I had a clue, guess I need some help from you

Where are my heroes gone?
That prevented me from failing
Why am I a foolish one?
Caught in depressions

Where are my lovers gone?
Did I kill them by night
Why I'm singing goodbye songs
My life is nearing its end

Where are my friends gone?
Seems like they had enough
And why do I go on?
I know why I'm how I am

Where are my federates gone?
Where are my rolemodels gone?
Where is my mother gone?
Where is this anthem gone?

I'm sitting on the bench
Wasting all my life
By asking shoulda, coulda, wouldas
Like I had a clue, guess I need some help from you

I'm sitting on the bench
Wasting my potential
By asking questions with no answers
Guess my life is dead, that's what Timmy said

Where are my federates gone?
Where are my rolemodels gone?
Where is my mother gone?
Where is this anthem gone?

by **Timmy94** » Sun May 27, 2012 11:41 pm

Too much to say yes (not enough to say no)

Timmalicious / 5:21

When the club was getting empty
And the melody stayed constant
Our views caught each other
In the heat of our passions

The attraction so exciting
The romance was on a pre-run
I was about to speak
But something interrupted me

Should I be able to...
Take this step
Would I be able to...
Take off my hat
Could I be able to...
Show all I get
There is too much to say yes, but not enough to say no

The atmosphere sparkling
Your scent so sweet
Hands touched each other
Your trust overloading

It's everything you give
In this special night
I never felt before
Got me wanting some more

Should I be able to...
Take this step
Would I be able to...
Take off my hat
Could I be able to...
Show all I get
There is too much to say yes, but not enough to say no

Don't you ever leave me
I don't want this night to end
Shouldn't it stay a dream
Stay By Me forever and now
This is something for the books
Let me know why you are my baby

Should I be able to...
Take this step
Would I be able to...
Take off my hat
Could I be able to...
Show all I get
There is too much to say yes, but not enough to say no

by **preyan** » Mon May 28, 2012 10:02 am

Immortal Love

You daggered my heart
You sucked my blood
Your made me feel
Like the one who's numb

And I think of you
And I can't help but smile
The way you bled me
I know you can't deny

Like we were meant to be
Like we were desperate in need
Like we loved for eternity

Love you KJB

by **Timmy94** » Mon May 28, 2012 9:52 pm

Nice song, preyan!

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Little Talks...

Timmalicious / 4:06

You are a homeless soul
Let me guide you home
Home where you feel loved

Let me listen to you
Every secret of you
I promise my words

And even if we are no longer together
You might be somewhere with nicer weather
There's something that holds us together
Memories of our little talks

Your tears tell stories
Let me know your worries
So we turn them into dust

And even if we are no longer together
You might be somewhere with nicer weather
There's something that holds us together
Memories of our little talks

And even if we are no longer together
You might be somewhere with nicer weather
There's something that holds us together
Memories of our little talks

Memories of our little talks

by **Muzikritik** » Wed May 30, 2012 9:00 pm

Challenge!

Ever wanted to write a song but couldn't quite verbalise it the way you wanted??

I want somebody to give me an idea/concept/phrase for a song and challenge me to produce the lyrics within 72 hours.

If you like the results, the song is yours to keep and do whatever you want with.

Keen??

Reply, or PM.

Oh, I'll put up one of my originals, so you can see what I've done in the past.

by **Muzikritik** » Wed May 30, 2012 9:06 pm

Trip The Alarm
Copyright 2009 / Rawiri James

VERSE 1
It was a keen addiction in between afflictions
So I guess I had it comin'
It was a sly prescription of a fly guy wishin'
Best I keep myself from runnin'

You was a pretty-wrapped package that a dude couldn't challenge
Baby pickin' you up, now lets go
Though the things you did was savage, I was feenin for your damage
Baby kickin' it up on the low

PRE-CHORUS
You can't play me like that (no)
And I aint gotcha back (no)
I can't put up wit that (no)
And I aint want you back (so)

CHORUS
Stop strippin me of my armour
You gotta trip the alarm
Before I quit and come harm ya
You gotta trip the alarm (gotta trip the alarm)

HOOK
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)

VERSE 2
It was the streets sacrificial 'cause the heats superficial
So I guess I gotta face the music
It was a self composition of a written imposition
My bad, 'cause I abused it

I'm in a powerless position sittin' in my own volition
Baby pickin' you up now lets go
A careless decision 'cause it seems I just won't listen
Baby kickin' it up on the low

PRE-CHORUS
You can't play me like that (no)
And I aint gotcha back (no)
I can't put up wit that (no)
And I aint want you back (so)

CHORUS
Stop strippin me of my armour
You gotta trip the alarm
Before I quit and come harm ya
You gotta trip the alarm (gotta trip the alarm)

HOOK
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)

This is for serious, it's for real
This is Armageddon, ror real
September 11, for real
Rawiri James for real

RAP
Time to disarm; you got me over and over again
Sinkin' slowly, you got me goin "I told ya" again
The label before me warned me not to over-indulge
Didn't heed it; aint think I needed to ever divulge
The pull you had on me, sad to see that it was magnetic
Tried numerous times but it seems I won't ever forget it
But don't dare it, don't think you didn't make me look pathetic
And I said it; shared it, I cared enough to let it out
Look how I'm talking now, check out my walking now
Words are slurry, vision blurry, me liquid stalking now
You got me falling down from every little thing you do
Sick of calling out so let me break it down for you
I gotta run, gotta go, gotta hit the throttle
Been a lotta fun, lotta dough, gettin' through the bottle
To the bottom of the point of no return to where I've lived
Now I've gotten to the broken glass and something's gonna trip

BRIDGE
I can't only taste it; the times that I've wasted
(From the A to the L to the K to the Y)
I am just now facin'; the crimes that were laced with
(From the A to the L to the K to the Y)

PRE-CHORUS
You can't play me like that (no)
And I aint gotcha back (no)
I can't put up wit that (no)
And I aint want you back (so)

CHORUS
Stop strippin me of my armour
You gotta trip the alarm
Before I quit and come harm ya
You gotta trip the alarm (gotta trip the alarm)

HOOK
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)
Gotta trip the alarm um uh oh
(Gotta trip the alarm)

This is for serious, it's for real

This is Armageddon, ror real
September 11, for real
Rawiri James for real

Gotta trip the alarm

by **WaitYourTurn** » Wed May 30, 2012 9:15 pm

This is cool!

I have a band, we're doing pretty well. I'll post some lyrics I've written for our songs!

Fate Keeper

Welcome to my realm, I've got a role for you to play, She says
With her name in lights and her crooked hands,
the smell of her breath on my neck is making me gag.
Sit yourself down here, she rolls out the red carpet, as we fraternise and jest,
Then her mood turns bitter, as her dance dies down,
I'm lying on the floor, without bravado, I'm bruised.
I'm divided, I'm in your hands, I'm caught in your web and I fear you'll chew me up,
I'm your play thing, Unnecessary,
Timid little girl became a fate keeper.
You've got me by my scruff, dragging me on all fours, all fours, like a dirty hound,
All the while under false pretence, your animated sunshine is darkening,
Dragged into my cage, no final warning and I'm trembling with fear,
Watch my empire fall once again, you bludgeon me with words as you decide my fate right there.
I'm divided, I'm in your hands, I'm caught in your web and I fear you'll chew me up,
I'm your play thing, Unnecessary,
Timid little girl became a fate keeper.
So I left one night seeking rapid vengeance, armed only with a pen in my hand,
I swear I wouldn't care if we met eyes again but I just can't get my head around,
My life support's back on, single handedly you cut the chord,
my loved ones and my friends, are finding it hard to breathe.

by **WaitYourTurn** » Wed May 30, 2012 9:17 pm

We Fight The Dawn

My Palms are sweaty,
My eyes are glazed
Walking onward, I feel a haze,
Make a space, I'm courting the beat
I dance with her, as she worships me
For tonight, I feel the music in me
For tonight, I feel the music in me
Every time I taste you,
My feet leave the floor
My favourite past-time, screaming for more
The tempo rises,
With a rush to the brain
Chemical mash up as we dance Insane
For tonight, I feel the music in me
For tonight,, I feel the music in me
We fight the dawn, my early morning
My companions and friends
We fight the dawn and then we start again
In slow motion, we move like the sea,
A 'Class-A' moment unburdens me
The sun is rising, the birds start to sing,
My senses, they do get the better of me
For tonight, I feel the music in me
For tonight, I feel the music in me
We fight the dawn, my early morning,
My companions and friends
We fight the dawn and then we start again

by **WaitYourTurn** » Wed May 30, 2012 9:20 pm

Saint That You Are

I ache to be near you,
you left me out to dry
You're bleeding me for all that I'm worth,
you leaving me is making me worse
You shot through my heart,
with my insecurities
You're bleeding me of my money again,
you're crushing me I feel mental again
And now, I want it to be like it was
I'm on a wasteland
and inferior
I'm in a slum
and inferior to the Saint that you are
Tie me in your words,
of ignorance and fear
You're fleecing me,
of my fortune once more
You're crushing me,
as you're stripping me down to the core
I want it to be like it was
I'm on a wasteland
and inferior
I'm in a slump
and inferior to the Saint that you are

by **Timmy94** » Wed May 30, 2012 10:27 pm

Departure Hall

Timmalicious / 5:30

I've been standing on the departure hall
Looking straight to the grafitti wall
I wonder what is waiting outside for me
Is it happiness, truth or liberty?

Should I stay right here and enjoy my life
Never knowing what I miss
Or should I learn to be able to say goodbye
Making it depend on this

What is it that leads me straight in the dark
In the distance a raising lightening spark
I breathe for hometown but live for you
And I always knew I'd come close to you

Should I stay right here and enjoy my life
Never knowing what I miss
Or should I learn to be able to say goodbye
Making it depend on this

I keep on wondering:
Where is happiness to find?
May those questions make me blind?
I know that I'm full of doubts
And on summer end's I might know...

I've been standing on the departure hall
Looking straight to the grafitti wall
I wonder what is waiting outside for me
Is it happiness, truth or liberty?

Should I stay right here and enjoy my life
Never knowing what I miss
Or should I learn to be able to say goodbye
Making it depend on this

by **Timmy94** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 6:52 pm

When Words Turn Into Music

1. That's Why I'll Never Learn 3:12
2. Dude With The Guitar 3:31
3. Rhythm Around The World 3:44
4. My Kingdom 2:59
5. Broken Hearts 3:12
6. What A Melody Can Do 3:44
7. Crumbs In The Corner 4:06
8. Like a volcano 4:25
9. Blame it on Susan! 3:25
10. C'garcon 2:44

by **Timmy94** » Fri Jun 01, 2012 7:58 pm

That's Why I'll Never Learn

Timmalicious / 3:12

I'm Mr. Chaotic obviously
That's what my old granny already said
I build towers and let them sink
Like dishwater in the kitchen sink

I cheat and let them cheat on me
I'm outlawed losing hopes for free
I walk the streets that end too soon
Got me looking like a concrete fool

And you let me go,
That's Why I'll Never Learn,
So eternally I'm gonna burn

Guess I won't if you go away
I'll never learn how to say
So it's flowing back to me
Seems way too obviously

You can try so much to change me
It won't have effect on me
I'm so lost and never turn out
Why you never get me without

And you let me go,
That's Why I'll Never Learn,
So eternally I'm gonna burn

Find me in the street with the dirt on its image
Find me in the place where nights take its victims
Find me in the ocean where my blocking is drowned
Find me exactly there where you won't expect me
Find me in the clubs where feet stick to the floor
Find me in the corners with my stupid drunk friends
Find me in the scene during an odd style situation
Find me not just there but in places of dubious flair

That's why I'll never learn... Mmmmm!

by **Timmy94** » Sat Jun 02, 2012 11:28 am

Dude With The Guitar

Timmalicious / 3:31

She's in love with the dude with the guitar
Is it his rockstar appeal that drives her insane?
Is it his audaciousness she liked to have herself?
Sitting here and discuss the obviously unobviously...
While she's doing well with the dude with the guitar

Give me a rocking one what she'd say?
Give me a time to show that it's me
That there's a rocker inside of me
Guess she'd love to see, wouldn't she?

She's in love with the dude with the guitar
Seems like she doesn't really know what's good
Look in my eyes and still have a kiss with him
Guess the hate makes my love be growing deeper...
Undeniable, she's in love with the dude with the guitar

Give me a rocking one what she'd say?
Give me a time to show that it's me
That there's a rocker inside of me
Guess she'd love to see, wouldn't she?

She's in love with this poser with the guitar
Seems like he's got the girls to let them fall
Well apparently some girls like to be cheated
She better faces what she misses without me
The moment she's in love with the poser with the guitar

Give me a rocking one what she'd say?
Give me a time to show that it's me
That there's a rocker inside of me
Guess she'd love to see, wouldn't she?

by **Timmy94** » Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:09 pm

Rhythm Around The World

Timmalicious / 3:44

We people are too different
Some think they're heavensent
While others haven't got a clue
I wonder what connects me'n'you

You say that it's money nice and clean
While others blame it on the tambourine
Others say it's style or the lack of it
I always used to give a damn about it

While now... The picture
gets clearer and clearer
And the truth...
Gets meaner and meaner

And now I know that all I did was nothing but right
Because you've gotta go through darkness to see light
I finally see the reason in everybody next to me
While this was something I never expected to see

And even when you don't know why the sun shines
Especially because you cursed it so many times
And everyone seems to be a stranger in your eyes
The rhythm around the world explains your paradise

The rhythm is everywhere...
Surrounding you and me...
A part of our liberty....
Boo, wouldn't you agree?

While now... The picture
gets clearer and clearer
And the truth...
Gets meaner and meaner

And now I know that all I did was nothing but right
Because you've gotta go through darkness to see light
I finally see the reason in everybody next to me
While this was something I never expected to see

And even when you don't know why the sun shines
Especially because you cursed it so many times
And everyone seems to be a stranger in your eyes
The rhythm around the world explains your paradise

The rhythm is everywhere...
Surrounding you and me...
A part of our liberty....
Boo, wouldn't you agree?

by **Timmy94** » Mon Jun 04, 2012 11:33 pm

No one is interested in this thread? Seems like I just end my current album and then stop posting here as no one else seems to care...

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My Kingdom

Timmalicious / 2:59

My Kingdom is closed so no one can hurt me
It's far away from all of those offenders
My heart still proves with its scars'n'all
And the doors might be closed for infinity

I learnt to trust nobody, not a friend not even me
Everything is intended, there's no good hope for free

My Kingdom is glorious,
yet so lonely and cold
May I be saved forever
Staying a loner and old

My Kingdom is comfortable but lost its warmth
How could you walk without learning to trust
The feet following every step you seem to go?
How could I seriously try to break out of it?

I learnt to trust nobody, not a friend not even me
Everything is intended, there's no good hope for free

My Kingdom is glorious,
yet so lonely and cold
May I be saved forever
Staying a loner and old

I'm not an egoist, in the end I save everybody from me
So I run away, Immutably, caught in reputed liberty

My Kingdom is glorious,
yet so lonely and cold
May I be saved forever
Staying a loner and old

by **Timmy94** » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:05 pm

Broken Hearts

Timmalicious / 3:12

Somebody turned my back on him
With a laugh in his face
I thought I was the only one
Until I found...

That I'm not the only one around
That there's a club of broken hearts
Who almost died in their own sadness
Until they found the power of team

Because when two people with broken hearts
Can build the strongest army in the world
There's no power that can ever stop us
Together we can make it through... The hardest times

And we won't shed a tear... Coz it's a sign of weakness

Still I was thinking about her
For far too many needless months
Because I found out that if she
Leaves Me she's no good anyway

And I have a right of feeling loved
I won't let somebody break my heart
Because my dudes in the same boat
And they let me forget all about you

Because when two people with broken hearts
Can build the strongest army in the world
There's no power that can ever stop us
Together we can make it through... The hardest times

You think you've got me at the point
When I would be addicted to you
It seems like your mission failed

Because when two people with broken hearts
Can build the strongest army in the world
There's no power that can ever stop us
Together we can make it through... The hardest times

And we won't shed a tear... Coz it's a sign of weakness

by **Timmy94** » Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:54 pm

What A Melody Can Do

Timmylicious / 3:44

Everyone already felt like walking against a wall
The way didn't seem to go on, something seemed wrong
All they needed is a friend to guide their way

Because nothing is impossible, just hard to realize
In those cases you just need an aim to go on
And maybe a helping hand from someone you trust

Do you remember when you felt like in the worst situation?
And you don't know how your life should be able to go on
Then something happens that no one expected to save you
And then you realize, that that's what a melody can do

Everyone already felt like the world is black
Someone someway went on to take all the colours
So let us together eliminate the misere fatale

When it's a melody you need the most right now
Then it's the heart to lighten up your life
And it helps you to stand up out of the dirt

Do you remember when you felt like in the worst situation?
And you don't know how your life should be able to go on
then something happens that no one expected to save you
And then you realize, that that's what a melody can do

Let's walk over the country with the tune in our head
Because nothing can ever make us feel hurt
After we have been through the hardest time of our lives

Do you remember when you felt like in the worst situation?
And you don't know how your life should be able to go on
Then something happens that no one expected to save you
And then you realize, that that's what a melody can do

by **Timmy94** » Wed Jun 13, 2012 11:49 pm

Crumbs In The Corner

Timmylicious / 4:06

Going back to the place we started talking
Seems like everything is still the same
And the air seems thick as always

Missed the room cleaner for quite some time
What a pity, but too soft for a crime
Guess she knows well why she doesn't

And months turn into years when the car is out of work
As candy sweet it sounds once you hear the magic words

But everytime we pass the crumbs in the corner
We remember the best times we ever had
When we felt so free... It's just you and me...

Yes that's really what left a notable mark
Remember how we said "as tough as a shark"
While laughing just like only kids do

And I agree that sometimes times go by
Not necessarily what I'm here to deny
But there's something waiting for us

And months turn into years when the kids are out of sight
As effortlessly it makes you feel once you catch the light

But everytime we pass the crumbs in the corner
We remember the best times we ever had
When we felt so free... It's just you and me...

But everytime we remember the crap we did
I will never forget our tears of joy
When we had a dream... Friends for eternity...

Going back to the point we lost our sight
I'll never gonna throw a tear behind
Coz it's to have passed, not to have lasted

But everytime we pass the crumbs in the corner
We remember the best times we ever had
When we felt so free... It's just you and me...

But everytime we remember the crap we did
I will never forget our tears of joy
When we had a dream... Friends for eternity...

by **Timmy94** » Sat Jun 16, 2012 1:42 pm

Like A Volcano

Timmalicious / 4:25

4x It's starting slowly (slowly, slowly, slowly)...

Like a little child walking over the bridge
Wanting to find out what's waiting outside
The road of stone is so hard to overcome
With every single step that's taking harder

It doesn't take long...
Until...

It's breaking out like a volcano
The adrenaline is hard to let go
And everything is taking you inside
There is no place left to hide
When it's breaking out like a volcano...

It's taking slowly to see the road's way
Was it the wrong decision we went to take?
I know it's up to me but I lost my mind
In a collection of mystery we are in

It doesn't take long...
Until...

It's breaking out like a volcano
The adrenaline is hard to let go
And everything is taking you inside
There is no place left to hide
When it's breaking out like a volcano...

Come hold my hand, the goal is near
Wait a second and cry a last tear
Seems like our release has come...

It's breaking out like a volcano
The adrenaline is hard to let go
And everything is taking you inside
There is no place left to hide
When it's breaking out like a volcano...

by **Timmy94** » Sun Jun 17, 2012 9:42 pm

Preview for an yet untitled song with the working title "Oh my America":

Oh my, oh my America
How you make my heart beat so fast
Every time you make this moment last
Oh my, oh my America
I'm sure you've got the sun in your eyes
You make me feel like I'm in a paradise

by **ANH** » Sun Jun 17, 2012 9:44 pm

You should perform at the UKMIX awards.

Get some good promo!

by **toni_pest** » Sun Jun 17, 2012 9:46 pm

Timmy did you record those songs cause I see there's a duration time next to them?